Writing Sample bits and pieces!

Hi (again),


This is a bit of my writing sample. I hope you like it!


The volcano shuddered, threatening to explode. Clouds of scalding hot steam issued from its blackened cone, charred by recent explosions. The volcano had been exploding for 2 to 3 weeks now, but those explosions had been small. This one was going to be different, we could all tell. me grandpa Jock and mum. we were on holiday in Samoa, staying in a local village, close to the second biggest volcano in the area. It had been sweltering hot, the temperture rising to 48c. Thats when the volcano started acting strangely. . . 




there you go and see you later,
Brooke!


P.S. give a comment if you like it!